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At the risk of embarrassing myself, I didn't read this knowing this was a short story based on a prompt, I thought it was a legit real event that someone named Zelda experienced. If anything, I hope you take that as a compliment of how well this was written. Great work!

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So... you see ghosts/spirits in stairwells too? Interesting.

but seriously, this story needs to be made into a short film. I loved the way you subtly wove in the details of the characters and the building while keeping the pace flowing.

Nailed the prompt.

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