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Wendy Cockcroft's avatar

This is quite the thriller! Love it!

Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Just read this for today's podcast and I loved it! I work in tech and I deal with AI stuff a lot in my professional writing. The most impressive part of this piece is how you made everything entirely believable with the trajectory of today's technology.

I know your style is typically more cozy and magical, but you can absolutely do thriller-type stories like this as well! As others have said, this was positively gripping!

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Omg omg omg REALLY?! I'm not as versed in AI and was waiting for someone to tell me my surface knowledge was not cutting it. Omg omg omg dreaming of writing like Crichton is a dream for me. Omg omg no wonder this story scares me. Yay! Thank you!

Rocky's Thoughts's avatar

Gripping! I'm wary of them talking in front of the technology. What if they're listening?? This feeds into every AI conspiracy I've ever had hahaha.

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

It creeped me out as I wrote it! Thanks for reading 🙌💗🙌

Rocky's Thoughts's avatar

Thanks for writing!