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Aravind Dharmasena's avatar

Scared me

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Oops? Thanks for reading

phin's avatar

Outlaw mirrors. Cover them all.

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂

Charles D's avatar

When did you become so wonderful at horror?

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

I honestly dunno. 🤣😂🤣

Charles D's avatar

You are good!

Rebecca Poleto's avatar

It's like a modern day Bloody Mary story! I love it!

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Yay! Im so happy you enjoyed it.

Charles D's avatar

Fri-yays!!! Still happen here too.

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

As they should. It is tradition.

James's avatar

punished by the rule of 3's. Usually when I Do it, three is just the right amount to get passed the thing that's been bothering me. Well done :)

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

It is a classic rule, had to play with it. THANK YOU James!!! So glad you like this one.

James's avatar

Had to take a quick time out to praise the fact that this person had 847 million views on a friyay. Impressive af

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Right? But it is TikTok so....viral video numbers are huge there. 😱😂🤣😂

James's avatar

I must be living in a different world, one forgotten by time. Regardless I just wanted to let you know that fucked me up.

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Sorry? It is a horror story….

James's avatar

yeah you're right I am a fucking idiot and the horrors never end

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Thank you for reading James. I usually write cozy, not horror.

T.P. Kaaos's avatar

This story crawled under my skin in the best of ways. A realization that hits like ice in the spine, corrosively unsettling. The sensation lingers, patient, precise until the final moment locks it in place. It reads like a quiet curse, beautifully delivered and once encountered it insists on being passed along.

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Thank you Kaaos! Everyone says it creeped them out & of course my instinct is to apologize. But….I meant it to be creepy.

Im glad it landed & you enjoyed it. 💜🙌💜

T.P. Kaaos's avatar

It is creeptastic in the best way! You did phenomenal, keep creeping people out! 🩵

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

I think I will, it is fun!

T.P. Kaaos's avatar

Love it!

Rachel Tribble's avatar

This is so creeeeeeepy ! Time to cover the mirrors

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

I keep apologizing….but yes, cover them up! 😉🙌

Rachel Tribble's avatar

🥰😂. Done!

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

💝💝💝💝❤️💝

Rachel Tribble's avatar

OMgosh. This was incredible!

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

You like it???? Thank you! ❤️🐢❤️

Rachel Tribble's avatar

Uh. Yeah !! It’s freaking awesome!

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Thank you. This makes me soooooo HAPPY!

Rachel Tribble's avatar

You should be!!

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Thank you. Typing the next story now. I'm so behind…..

Rachel Tribble's avatar

You got this!

Rachel Tribble's avatar

O. I have to go see

Verdant Butterfly's avatar

well, that's nightmare fuel guess ill be writing tonight instead of sleeping...😳🦋😳

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

In this genre, nightmare fuel is a good thing. If it was romance Id be crying. Lol

Verdant Butterfly's avatar

and its absolutely fantastic writing...and a Fri-yay...😉

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Thank you ! I love Fri-yays. ❤️

Mina Howell's avatar

Oh my gosh yours is so amazing!

It makes me want to redo mine 😅

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Do not rewrite yours! No no no!

Thank you!

Wendy Russell's avatar

Oooof.... seriously creepy and so beautifully written.

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Thank you so much Wendy!

I'm so happy you liked it.

BentButTrue's avatar

I wanted to try this but changed my mind. Mainly because it takes way too much work to do. 😉

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Good choice Bent! Good choice.

😉 thank you!

LM Sypher's avatar

Eek! This was seriously spooky!

Richard Pack's avatar

All the precision of the ritual, only for it to turn out that Any wish counts . . . Brutal.

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Sorry, little girls grow up looking in a mirror & wishing for a different reflection, to be heard, to be seen. That was my underlying current. I must have lost that thread….

Richard Pack's avatar

No, that was perfect! That was meant as a compliment.

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Ohhh ok, thank you!!!