Such a gorgeous lyrical piece this is " the taxi gliding through the waves to the merfolk libraries lined with pearl-bound books." You have a way with words in making it feel enchanting.. your kids are lucky!! it reads like a legend whispered through time—a tale of light, imagination, and the power of shared stories.
Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it. Details, those are so important to me. I want the reader to be immersed in my story, with the sensory details like a cozy blanket.
This is a legend in Starlight Cove. Everyone wants to ride on this Taxi!
Masterfully written Maryellen! I think you really nailed the spirit of the prompt with your writing. Thank you for taking the time to try this out, I know it wasn't easy, but yours turned out I think better than my own!
What an enchanting story/poem! Thank you, Maryellen. The Starlight Taxi feels like a magical lifeline, carrying its passengers through realms of connection and creativity. I love how their shared storytelling becomes both their strength and salvation - such a beautiful journey into the power of imagination!
Thoughtful, all encompassing, and amazingly put! I feel like I can look at Starlight Cove as a whole through this one. Paired with your great storytelling it was a fantastic read.
Such a gorgeous lyrical piece this is " the taxi gliding through the waves to the merfolk libraries lined with pearl-bound books." You have a way with words in making it feel enchanting.. your kids are lucky!! it reads like a legend whispered through time—a tale of light, imagination, and the power of shared stories.
Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it. Details, those are so important to me. I want the reader to be immersed in my story, with the sensory details like a cozy blanket.
This is a legend in Starlight Cove. Everyone wants to ride on this Taxi!
And you achieved that beautifully! The sensory details truly made the story feel alive.
The tale that binds us through imagination….
Yes and you do indeed have a huge imagination….
I enjoyed the journey!
So happy you enjoyed it. Thank you!
Masterfully written Maryellen! I think you really nailed the spirit of the prompt with your writing. Thank you for taking the time to try this out, I know it wasn't easy, but yours turned out I think better than my own!
I've never wrangled & wrestled words so much & felt so adrift. I took breaks & gave up a dozen times. 🤣 thank you!
What an enchanting story/poem! Thank you, Maryellen. The Starlight Taxi feels like a magical lifeline, carrying its passengers through realms of connection and creativity. I love how their shared storytelling becomes both their strength and salvation - such a beautiful journey into the power of imagination!
Thank you! This is a sort of retelling, where they were being chased by a shadow entity & the only way to win was to tell a collective story.
Thoughtful, all encompassing, and amazingly put! I feel like I can look at Starlight Cove as a whole through this one. Paired with your great storytelling it was a fantastic read.
Really?! I wrestled with this one. Keeping my Queen Agers & Otis active in the Cove is my goal. Thank you!