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Gary L Taylor's avatar

Great work. A lot in there to feel. Nicely done.

Wendy Russell's avatar

Woah. This was so cool... that slow realisation is so well handled -- the glow, the restraint, the fact that he knows exactly what this means and carries on anyway.

And Wendy’s response (lol) … that moment of choosing not to act? Dude, that landed hard. It shifts the whole story without a single dramatic beat.

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