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Gary L Taylor's avatar

Great work. A lot in there to feel. Nicely done.

Wendy Russell's avatar

Woah. This was so cool... that slow realisation is so well handled -- the glow, the restraint, the fact that he knows exactly what this means and carries on anyway.

And Wendy’s response (lol) … that moment of choosing not to act? Dude, that landed hard. It shifts the whole story without a single dramatic beat.

Maryellen Brady πŸ’—πŸ“š's avatar

Yay! This is definitely a side quest story. I am already preparing for these two to adventure in another direction. But not on Ignacia's save the world tour….

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Wendy Russell's avatar

I love when he says :

β€œI wrote the damn protocol, Wendy”.🀣

Maryellen Brady πŸ’—πŸ“š's avatar

That line made me giggle πŸ’•

Mina Howell's avatar

Oh my gosh 😭

This is incredibly sad, this really feels like a biopic of how older people feel ostracized by new technology and younger people.

I know it's crispy zombies, but it also feels like that moment you realize your replacement is on the horizon.

Maryellen Brady πŸ’—πŸ“š's avatar

I love how you see things…