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Emerald City Ghosts's avatar

Love this!

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Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Thank you!!!

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Mina Howell's avatar

This is a very "don't drink the kool-aid" community lol

I really like this one! I especially liked how she exposed the secret instead of just giving into it as the others had done!

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Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

It is....there are secrets wrapped in secrets in this one. Thank you! Folk horror is so new. I had no clue what I was doing....

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Mina Howell's avatar

It doesn't show at all, this is fantastic!

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Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Thank you. It was rewritten so many times 🤣

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williamphaynes/elliott's avatar

Quite a bedtime tale

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Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Oops William….I did say Folk Horror 🤣

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Keith Fey's avatar

Well ,,, how the hell am i going to fall asleep tonight after your bedtime story... ??? I LOved your style,,, Maryellen.. Kind regards Keith

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Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Oiii sorry! Of course you read the horror story first 🤣🤣🤣 thank you!!!

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Keith Fey's avatar

Oiii its ok ! I shall have two cups of chamomile tea….😊

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Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

I do have a sweet bed time story posted. The Boy Made of Air. Promise it will send you to sleep in a better mood.

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Keith Fey's avatar

tomorrow… its half past one in the morning here… REALY !!!

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Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Oh my word! Sleep!!!

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Keith Fey's avatar

Just a realy good bit of advice…24 hrs later…we had a fire!!!!!!!!

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Bill Cusano's avatar

There are patterns in your writing that tell me it is yours. I guess we call that voice. Your imagination blooms with mystery and intrigue. I wish I had a clue that she had hidden something while she could still control her faculties. But great job.

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Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Ohhhh good point. I had her rocking back & forth between belief & mistrust. But you are right, it needs more there. Good catch!

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Bill Cusano's avatar

I believe we support each other better by sharing what we truly believe.

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